The figures started to move and awaken streatching slowly and testing thier new forms. The light form upon moving his hand realized that he could create a clear liquid that could cover countless distances. The light form also found that wherever he steped soft soil appeared along with, in some places, hard rock. The dark form was amazed at his brothers abilities and while exhaleing blew a great gust that threw the liquid across space while at the same time where he walked flames sprang up and ravaged the new ground.
Pleased with his creations displays over the powers he had given them Edlin sent them to the world he had chosen for them to rule. The two departed eagerly on thier mission to watch over the world thier master had created while he set off to work on a new world that he may even let them rule if they did well enough watching this one. Edlin watched his creations leave and something inside him knew that he had done something wrong that would need to be kept in check, he turned and drew one more orb from within himself, molded it, and once again sat waiting.
Bit more there
Thursday, March 22, 2007
Monday, March 19, 2007
Story Idea 3
Here is a bit of what I've come up with so far.
Edlin sat upon his throne of gilded stars gazing lovingly at the nine worlds circling him. Edlin had created these worlds over a vast time and was attached to all of them which made the choice he had to make very hard. Edlin was going to gift one of the words with forces other then life to help keep the balance while he worked on other worlds, this was but a test as he had never done it before and wanted to see if it could work. From within himself he drew two orbs of light, one shone with the brightness of a small sun while the other was as dark as the empty space around it. Edlin molded these orbs into a humam shape and set them carefully at the foot of his throne waiting for them to awaken.
Just a taste, I've got a bit more but that's all for now.
Edlin sat upon his throne of gilded stars gazing lovingly at the nine worlds circling him. Edlin had created these worlds over a vast time and was attached to all of them which made the choice he had to make very hard. Edlin was going to gift one of the words with forces other then life to help keep the balance while he worked on other worlds, this was but a test as he had never done it before and wanted to see if it could work. From within himself he drew two orbs of light, one shone with the brightness of a small sun while the other was as dark as the empty space around it. Edlin molded these orbs into a humam shape and set them carefully at the foot of his throne waiting for them to awaken.
Just a taste, I've got a bit more but that's all for now.
Wednesday, March 7, 2007
Works in development
I have three more story ideas that apeal to me but can't think of names, assistance would be helpful.
Story idea 1
Two peasants that work thier way up oposite sides of thier worlds temple system untill something tragic happens...
Story idea 2
A student that progresses his/her way through a school of some kind, could use help with that. Think Harry Potter but less focus on "magic" and not throwing titles around so carelessly.
Story idea 3
I can't give a discription of this in short so i'll post what i've thought of soon.
Story idea 1
Two peasants that work thier way up oposite sides of thier worlds temple system untill something tragic happens...
Story idea 2
A student that progresses his/her way through a school of some kind, could use help with that. Think Harry Potter but less focus on "magic" and not throwing titles around so carelessly.
Story idea 3
I can't give a discription of this in short so i'll post what i've thought of soon.
Tuesday, March 6, 2007
The Hand of War
This story is about a world that has lived in peace for many years from the efforts of a noble warrior who trapped the Lord of Night inside a prison of stone then founded an order to keep it safe. Recently in a joint effort from the Lord of Night and a rogue god shattered the prison.
Characters
Highlord Treon --- Ancient warrior who imprisoned the Lord of Night and spoke of his return
Radiment --- Squire to Highlord Treon
Commander Springsword --- Commander at arms and trainer of Highlord Treons military forces
Lord Jagras --- Doom Lord sent to hinder Highlord Treons progress
Lord of Night --- Commander of all things evil and corrupt in the world, a god in his own
Shardin --- Ex-monk of the god of valor Zidar
Avela --- Devout paladin of the god of justice Meron
Gods
Zidar --- God of valor
Meron --- God of justice
Hilen --- Goddess of shadow
Ashwraith --- God of darkness
Una --- Goddess of light
Characters
Highlord Treon --- Ancient warrior who imprisoned the Lord of Night and spoke of his return
Radiment --- Squire to Highlord Treon
Commander Springsword --- Commander at arms and trainer of Highlord Treons military forces
Lord Jagras --- Doom Lord sent to hinder Highlord Treons progress
Lord of Night --- Commander of all things evil and corrupt in the world, a god in his own
Shardin --- Ex-monk of the god of valor Zidar
Avela --- Devout paladin of the god of justice Meron
Gods
Zidar --- God of valor
Meron --- God of justice
Hilen --- Goddess of shadow
Ashwraith --- God of darkness
Una --- Goddess of light
Why I created this...
First I'd like to thank you for visiting this blog. Second I'd like to say that this blog is for a list of all my stories and what they are about and so on. Feel free to leave suggestions and constructive criticism. Once again thank you for visiting
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